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I read that article and it seems somewhat incomprehensible
Was this article written by AI? It’s full of what seem to be overly specific references and is just really fucking weirdly paced and disorganized.
It read okay to me? I played the game pretty recently, though, so maybe it would read weird if I hadn’t. Or maybe it was poorly edited.
If anything, LLM output tends to have an oppposite feel, too coherent in an unnatural and paradoxically disconnected way.
few em dashes also…
Em dashes are definitely a less reliable sign in professionally written and edited articles. That’s the context where actual humans will use them most often
